Wednesday, April 7, 2010

My New! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being with you,
Can I call that new?
Because,
In my mind,
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ramya bodi
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2010

liked these lines: In the mystical sue, Between me and you! ! ! There's an amazing allure, Towards me, very nice poem indeed

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Ratnakar Rout 05 May 2010

As it is rightly said, relations are made in the heaven.No relationship is new or built afresh.It continues for many births.Your poem has a strong philosophical back up.A very good poem.Thanks a lot for sharing.

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You are a good poet in waiting.The beginning has the spark of a potential explosion ahead. The grip over rhyme schemes and diction will stand by you and your pessimistic notes will triumph once.Keep writing. Regards.. M.D Dinesh Nair, HOD [English] NRI Academy, Vijayawada,

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mohsin amin khan 27 April 2010

really nice poem when you have inner courage nothing can stop you keep going you will succeed i loved the poem bcoz of this word sand dune and sitting together if from poetic view i will stare this line sand dune keeps changing its fate nice one

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Siddharth Singh 18 April 2010

Mystical sue is a mystery for me too. Nevertheless a very interesting piece.

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Prateep Sengupta 16 April 2010

As a devastating cyclone on 13th instances put the net down, only today I had the opportunity of going through your poem. Yes, I like it very much, particularly the implied vagueness in some of the lines. It gives a wide option to the readers to interpret it in his/her own way. Keep writing.

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Karmen Timane 13 April 2010

I really enjoyed your poem but i don't understand what u meant by mystical sue. can u kindly explain it to me.Anyway good poem...keep up the good work.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 April 2010

There is always a New in life and love, all we need is to explore... Good poem, Ramya. Keep writing. Naseer

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Rajinder Singh 13 April 2010

lovely poem.keep writing

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R.k Das 13 April 2010

lovely poem, , wonderful self-chatting, , , beautiful quizes, indeed...thanx

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Rajinder Singh 13 April 2010

lovely poem.keep writing

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Rajinder Singh 13 April 2010

lovely poem.keep writing

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Varsha Priyadarshini 13 April 2010

wow! i like it! hope u keep on writing..the same way

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