Sunday, October 25, 2009

.my New York Girl (Love Poems) Comments

Rating: 5.0

My New York girl,
So sweet and kind,
I cannot keep you
From my mind.
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Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems)
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Susan Williams 16 September 2020

The New York dawns Are cold and grey And daylight... Washes dreams away. - - - -lovely and melancholy at the same time

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Ken E Hall 05 November 2009

A sad tale of a girl that left may she return to your door good write with rythm regards

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 November 2009

.And came no more….’ ‘Washes dreams away’ No no washed away dreams [memory] molecule mull and mull subtly.. Wow! What a nice poem? Voted ten++ Ms. Nivedita. UK Cordially invite to read / comment and….my poems niv

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Kim Robin Edwards 25 October 2009

Good Rythm to this poem! I once had a New York girl myself.. Lovely write.. K.R.E..

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