Sunday, July 26, 2020

My New Table Comments

Rating: 4.9

My new, rustic kitchen table,
Swallows completely my turbulent state,
I feel calm like the ocean's near stillness,
As it holds its breath and waits
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Hazel Durham was last seen on PoemHunter on 25 November 2020…

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Chinedu Dike 01 January 2023

A beautiful, nostalgic rendition exquisitely crafted from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Happy New Year, Hazel. Remain enriched.

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This wonderful poem is ranked #21 on the Best Poems of The Members" listed on PoemHunter today. Congratulations, dear poet.

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Congratulations on this poem securing Rank #30 on Best Members Poems today. All the best, Hazel!

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This magnificent poem is ranked high among the "Best Poems of Members" featured on PoemHunter today. A lovely poem, " I sprinkle rose petals red, yellow and pink / Over our open hearts that give a mischievous wink. "

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Bharati Nayak 23 July 2022

A mix of nostalgic memories and love of your parents are associated with the table and it invokes great feelings when you use it.A fantastic write!

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

Where are you, my dear poetress? This is an old poem from last year--which I loved---but where are you? This PH member misses your pen!

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Hazel Durham 15 January 2021

Hi Susan...great to hear from you..I'm looking forward to reading more of your superb poems!

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Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Long time no see. Yes, the skies keep smiling down from the heavens above. Very sentimental to me

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2020

Mam and dad spread their happiness on my new table, ......... ......... To console our hearts to survive, My table is now full of hope and love, The skies keep smiling down from the heavens above......much impressive lines that I love most. This poem is so beautiful and inspiring one. Thank you dear madam for sharing your brilliant imagery and experience through this poem here.,10

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

'To console our hearts to survive, My table is now full of hope and love, The skies keep smiling down from the heavens above.' - The last stanza is so beautiful!

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Lovely! Lovely! Lovely! Lovely! I cannot say " lovely" enough times about this poem that captures the readers' hearts and souls from the very first. We relate to the journey our family's prized possessions so well and tenderly used give us when they are gone but their life remains in a tea cup, a vase, a flower's fragrance, a photograph- -thank you so much for stirring our memories as well. 10++++ and onto my fav with this lovely, lovely, lovely poem!

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Prabir Gayen 27 July 2020

My new, rustic kitchen table, Swallows completely my turbulent state, I feel calm like the ocean's near stillness, As it holds its breath and waits...fine poem, , /

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Valsa George 27 July 2020

A very beautiful write transcending the inner joy and peace you enjoy in your new house near your new table. The porcelain teacups that belonged to your grandma and the photo frame of your parents take you back to the sweet times you had and the warmth of love you experienced once.

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M Asim Nehal 26 July 2020

Fantastic poem with mixture of imagery, metaphors and nature. I pick the last stanza: To console our hearts to survive, My table is now full of hope and love, The skies keep smiling down from the heavens above.100++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 July 2020

There is the table Table of hope and life Table of life and love Table of love and peaceful heart.........

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