Thursday, January 22, 2009

My New Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Sabrina ,
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Afzal Shauq 19 June 2009

its heartfelt stanza of your great poem... the pain is managed now but legs are too heavy when they won't move by themselves the home nurse put me to bed but I hope to wake up from this nightmare the way you did this poem is impressive and make me think anbout you new life.. and sure heart knocking one, soul shaking too..liked this poem..10+++++

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

repentence and sorrow expressed painfully. life can b so cruel, sometimes just one mistake leads us to repent the whole life. good write

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Luis Alvarado 28 January 2009

As bad as it may seem, be grateful that you still have your life. Thanks for sharing and may you be blessed always..........

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 January 2009

This is not a poem. It is a call to all. To all who go out and brave the world. This, could be you. How brave are we? GW62

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