Thursday, October 1, 2009

My Neverland Comments

Rating: 3.9

She awoke and her world had changed
No longer was she surrounded by the dull white colour of her bedroom walls, but enveloped in a place of vast green grass and a night sky a blanket of darkness
Yet light was everywhere
The stars did not stay trapped in the skies net but danced freely in the night
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Leah Ayliffe
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a beautiful story with beautiful way of naration..

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Alexander Shaumyan 01 October 2009

We're on the same page with my latest post. What would our world be without our ability to imagine. Beautiful thoughts.

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Jean Dament 01 October 2009

A lovely story told within this poem that has great imagery to it. I missed seeig some rhyming, but it's ok, that's just me. Ravensong

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Leah Ayliffe

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