My Neighbourhood Comments

Insightful lines penned with lucidity and beautiful images of pristine environment. Well expressed thoughts in a captivating narrative piece. Thanks for sharing Samuel.

As everyone said below me the poem is really a fine descriptive one.. But alongside that I really liked your choices of words. They are well-chosen and some of them are repeated too, like 'hoe' and 'neighbourhood'.. This gives a nice support to the subject matter of your poem.. And finally, you decided to [selectively] choose the time between dawn to evening, keeping the reader wonder about what happens at night... A really well crafted poem Samuel.. Thank you for sharing..

A nice description., a charming neighborhood.

Children running to school, Men rushing to farms with hoes, Shops opening for business, It is morning in my neighbourhood. Very deep and beautiful expression that conveys sweet memories of life. Nicely penned...10

**A very descriptive poem, Samuel. I enjoyed reading and learning of your neighborhood Peace

, beautiful description of morning, noon and evening, well- penned, continue composing poems, you have the talent use it, thanks for sharing, , i enjoyed reading the poem, , if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments,

beautiful description of morning, noon and evening, well- penned, continue composing poems, you have the talent use it, thanks for sharing,