My Neighbor's House Comments

Excellent Ian. The shock that you provide us with is superb. As Max say's it seems to think of danger as being beautiful, but you have a point. This is the sort of writing that forces the reader to rethink their whole outlook on life. It turns 'commonsense' on its head.

I may have to walk out to my ledge to have this experience first-hand. I don't know if I've connected beauty with danger, though I think I've experienced the adreneline rush. You write compellingly about it. I like the structure of your poem, and the way you end it.