Sunday, October 1, 2017

My Name Shall Live Comments

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Long after the sun goes down over my grave
And the earth becomes my final resting place
Long after my soul has left its mortal enclave
My words will abound from earth to outer space.
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Ivan Brooks Sr
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Sochukwu Ivye 14 October 2017

This is great, Ivan. To carry meaning, versification and rhyme scheme in correspondence is a great feat. I cherish moments spent digesting masterpieces as this. Just do more, Sir.

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Ivan Brooks 18 October 2017

Thanks for such positive words..Kindly read '' Cry For Justice''

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

Long after I am gone and my soul has departed My great name will continue to softly echo. ...Definitely good works remain here as memory and history for others. Life's journey is previously determined. Long after you leave this temporal phase of life, body turns into duty. An amazing poem is wisely penned.10

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Ivan Brooks 18 October 2017

Thanks ever so much for your kind words....please read '' CRY FOR JUSTICE

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