Wednesday, April 1, 2009

My Naked Body Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay here with my true nakedness bearing for the
entire world to see, a faceless woman in a man’s
world searching for the true mean of free.
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Kimbaline Navas (she who waits)
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 April 2009

Beautiful write with bitterness and satire and feminist touch as well. Last two lines uplift the whole poem and soul supersedes the body......10.

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