When Beauty
Comes to meet with I
Naked she
Wonderful! no shy.
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'...Beauty always // Giver, not recipient....' So simple but I missed it till on date LOL! ! Ten++ for ‘Lady-Luck’ with beauty. niv Please find new posts and looking for your comments niv
a wonderful poem showing us the various dimensions of love and beauty...a lot of depth i this poem...it seems to connect the beauty of all...is beauty an expression of god...ypu make me think....10
, too, pray with tears and sigh Beauty said- 'For now bye dear bye'. a thing of beauty is joy for ever.. beauty in any form is welcome and praise worth. it is not to be cried over. feel shy or to betouched..... well done and i loved it....10 read mine touch me not...cry not...love at first sight
wandering, wonderful and stimulating...nicely penned....read my poem called I AM....u may like it
the many sides of love...the many parts of us...the many meanings...very well written
'I, too, pray with tears and sigh Beauty said- 'For now bye dear bye' SIMPLY AMAZING ! ! 10+
I am Romeo, I am juliet, I am nature, WOW. i feel like i need a cigarette after reading that. wow.
I like it alot It gets a 10. Though there are a couple parts where your message gets a tiny bit lost the jocking and black hole stanza. I feel it is kind of misleading with strays of extra words. The whole flow of the poem kust changes a bit. Kinda messing with the master peace. Just my opinion you don't have to listen. Zachary Clark
i agree. you deserve much higher then a 10. so imaginitive. i wish i could write like you. you are a great insperation.1000000+++++++++++++++++
Dude i would so buy this poem from you i loved it so much you get the whole visualization of this event it's very aawe-inspiring for me to read you deserve higher than a 10 ~Izzzzzzzy~
wonderfullllllllllllll poem..loved it..filled by excellent verses and beautiful images...10+++++++++++++
wooww.. i was like rapping when i was reading it..hehe very good one, , . rich thought you got there.. :)
Wow Wickedd Thats One Of The Best I Have Ever Read Thats Not 10 Though Thats 100+ Well Done Mate
AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOME POETRY WITH EXCELLENT IMAGINATION! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
its a mindblowing poem, i like it very much..its really heart touching.. i love this poem...
This is awesome, very inspiring. I love it.Do me the favour of notifying me 4 more.
I loved it very heart warming. How do u come up with this stuff?
From: Francis Duggan (Australia ;) To: Sarwar Chowdhury Date Time: 12/5/2008 5: 01: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) - 'My Naked Beauty Said' is such a beautiful poem up there amongst your best and that is saying a lot up to eighty comments and worthy of everyone of them and huge ratings you are indeed a man of words.keep on penning Sarwar. F Duggan
Sounds as if you have your life together top 2 bottom and enjoying every moment of it just fine! LoL! enjoyed this, Sar....Keep that pen pumping (as well) ! ~FjR~