Monday, November 24, 2008

#### My Naked Beauty Said- Comments

Rating: 4.5

When Beauty
Comes to meet with I
Naked she
Wonderful! no shy.
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sarwar chowdhury
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 February 2015

Sounds as if you have your life together top 2 bottom and enjoying every moment of it just fine! LoL! enjoyed this, Sar....Keep that pen pumping (as well) ! ~FjR~

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 November 2009

'...Beauty always // Giver, not recipient....' So simple but I missed it till on date LOL! ! Ten++ for ‘Lady-Luck’ with beauty. niv Please find new posts and looking for your comments niv

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 September 2009

a wonderful poem showing us the various dimensions of love and beauty...a lot of depth i this poem...it seems to connect the beauty of all...is beauty an expression of god...ypu make me think....10

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Obinna Eruchie 08 September 2009

Wonderfully visualised, Sarwar.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2009

, too, pray with tears and sigh Beauty said- 'For now bye dear bye'. a thing of beauty is joy for ever.. beauty in any form is welcome and praise worth. it is not to be cried over. feel shy or to betouched..... well done and i loved it....10 read mine touch me not...cry not...love at first sight

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Nikunj Sharma 13 August 2009

wandering, wonderful and stimulating...nicely penned....read my poem called I AM....u may like it

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dr veenaa rai 11 August 2009

the many sides of love...the many parts of us...the many meanings...very well written

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Tara Fortier 04 August 2009

'I, too, pray with tears and sigh Beauty said- 'For now bye dear bye' SIMPLY AMAZING ! ! 10+

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Stephen Magill 28 July 2009

I am Romeo, I am juliet, I am nature, WOW. i feel like i need a cigarette after reading that. wow.

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Zachary Clark 28 July 2009

I like it alot It gets a 10. Though there are a couple parts where your message gets a tiny bit lost the jocking and black hole stanza. I feel it is kind of misleading with strays of extra words. The whole flow of the poem kust changes a bit. Kinda messing with the master peace. Just my opinion you don't have to listen. Zachary Clark

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Crystle Jones 22 July 2009

i agree. you deserve much higher then a 10. so imaginitive. i wish i could write like you. you are a great insperation.1000000+++++++++++++++++

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Dude i would so buy this poem from you i loved it so much you get the whole visualization of this event it's very aawe-inspiring for me to read you deserve higher than a 10 ~Izzzzzzzy~

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wonderfullllllllllllll poem..loved it..filled by excellent verses and beautiful images...10+++++++++++++

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wooww.. i was like rapping when i was reading it..hehe very good one, , . rich thought you got there.. :)

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Ek Ladki S______ 14 June 2009

Wow Wickedd Thats One Of The Best I Have Ever Read Thats Not 10 Though Thats 100+ Well Done Mate

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOME POETRY WITH EXCELLENT IMAGINATION! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Susanta Bandha 23 December 2008

its a mindblowing poem, i like it very much..its really heart touching.. i love this poem...

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Oreva Oku 17 December 2008

This is awesome, very inspiring. I love it.Do me the favour of notifying me 4 more.

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Karol Valencia 12 December 2008

I loved it very heart warming. How do u come up with this stuff?

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 December 2008

From: Francis Duggan (Australia ;) To: Sarwar Chowdhury Date Time: 12/5/2008 5: 01: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) - 'My Naked Beauty Said' is such a beautiful poem up there amongst your best and that is saying a lot up to eighty comments and worthy of everyone of them and huge ratings you are indeed a man of words.keep on penning Sarwar. F Duggan

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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