Friday, May 28, 2010

My Mystery Woman Comments

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Is it the warmth of her gaze, or the brightness of her chuckle?

Is it the sun in her smile, that sends rays into my soul?
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Frank Boyd Jr
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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 04 June 2010

you really know how to describe for example this verse............ 'Is it the warmth of her gaze, or the brightness of her chuckle? ' well thought ideas......and the style is unique so don't worry about how the verses are arranged it's your style and i like it..... keep it up! ! ! ! !

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