Monday, February 12, 2018

My Musings Comments

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You listen to all my whisperings,
you know what lies in my heart;
Your gazes follow my breaths,
only you can foretell my untold parts.
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Nikhat Bano
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2020

O Jolly! Will you listen to my forlorn stories? How did I spend my silken nights without you? O Zeal! I know you'll join me one day, you're within my reach, I'm within you. how did i spend my silken nights without you. what a wonderful expression. very poetic are you dear poetess. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 March 2018

Very impressive write, Nikhat. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 12 February 2018

Fascinating poem of love and longing for the soulmate whose arrival would be like morning breeze and joy. It also shows the commitment of lovers for each other- 'you're within my reach, I'm within you'. Thanks a lot.

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