Tuesday, August 2, 2016

My Muse - Senryu Comments

Rating: 5.0

I become listless
When you are not there with me
The spark of my life
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C. P. Sharma
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Rajnish Manga 04 August 2016

I become listless Vacuum around I become alone...... / One can imagine a life without the muse that amused the poet as a unified soul till she flew to her heavenly abode. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2016

stand by for more she loves you for sure lovely kid is it yours

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2016

I STILL SEE the sparkle in ur eye she is lovely and at 75 one can't expect to stand all day long U do a great service to all humanity by showing pictures so lovely Do vigil keep hungry eyes do peep

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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