Her ashen face upon the pillow lay
As then the light about her hair did play
Her eyes so glinted with the coming day
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Interesting. Well done and finely set. Such a joy to read. Sometimes, we need a little break, but... happy for the resurrection.
The Reader - An interesting thought, but no I was not thinking about Captain Cur when I wrote this. My Muse comes from within myself, but I can see where you are coming from.
Poems are generally appreciated n interpreted according to the understanding, assumptions and whims of the readers, so here i would like to give my own interpretation (that might be wrong) ...the poets continue to take inspiration from each other, n in a way they are each other's support...this poem seems to me about Captain Cur's decision to stay on the site, he serves as the muse here... :)
You call it your muse I call it block. But this poem proves it never left you! Me thinks you were just kidding? Keep that muse coming Val.
Your Muse is always with you and your melodious poems are proof. Lovely, Ma'am.10++++++
With the Muse set in your heart, soul and by your side' what stunning magic we are going to see! ! A Wonderful write! !
Here is the late evening muse: Silly muse you startled me Your reported absence and demise, Well you're back so set to work On golden shores and eyes, No more skiving off, refrain We want sonnets, rhymes and ballads And rhythms set in train And all before you can go home, So don't, I repeat don't, do it again.
Soi pleased your muse is back Val-, your poems are just wonderful with or without it though.another wonderful write.
Pirate Girl is always dying on me. She wants me to miss her I guess. All kidding aside great write, it's so nice to be mused.
Absolutely lovely write.... and lovely that you appreciate your muse...tyvm karen