Thursday, December 10, 2015

My Muse! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Behind me there is a phantom,
munching some juicy sewing gum,
never noticed it when I was young.
Never bothered it when I was bold,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 December 2015

Short and sweet soliloquy giving vent to thoughts.Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Feathers of life do wonder in this interesting expression. Fantastically you have expressed entire thought in this poem. Wisely penned.10

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