Thursday, October 29, 2015

My Muse Comments

Rating: 4.0

I don’t know what to do
but my heart, it needs soothe
or else, i shall lose:
the heart of mine, from which, happiness ooze
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Tsu Kuei Yang
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Fabrizio Frosini 30 October 2015

''with the background i shall fuse''... :) welcome at poemhunter, Tsu.. keep on posting.. Ciao

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Wes Vogler 29 October 2015

I do not fully understand but find the form striking

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Kelly Kurt 29 October 2015

Thanks for sharing, Tsu Kuei Yang.

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James Mclain 29 October 2015

When you are young the clock for you stops just to start over again.. iip

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Gajanan Mishra 29 October 2015

my alarm on snooze, really meaningful, thanks, go on..

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