My Murderer Was Hiding Right Inside My Heart Comments
There was one thing in the heart, and it was painful.
The tears that flowed from the eyes had a tinge to them.
The body was riddled with wounds, and pain was all over.
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A wonderful couplet.Though the heart was certain that He would appear, Yet kept asking eyes have you seen Him.
Great imagery, all are fantastic but I liked: I didn't sleep all night and instead gazed at the stars, The moon was unfaithful, hiding behind clouds.
Standout couplet: My murderer was hiding right inside my heart, With each exhalation, he wonders who it was.
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7/18/2025 7:30:06 PM # 1.0.0
Very well penned 5 stars