My Motion Comments

Lovely allegory on life in this universe. In Sanskrit world/universe is called jagat. It simply means what moves. There is nothing motionless in this world, motions within motions, amidst a chaos of emotions. Well done dear poet.

Moving train! To train your mind with the truth; Moments of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Life is one of motion. Sometimes we move at an accelerated pace, sometimes in a slow motion. Sometimes we stand still, but we cannot stand still for long. Life demands us to keep on moving. A train without movement is of no use. So is human life! Very philosophical!

the poetic mind is moving like moving train hither to thither everywhere no stoppage just a while rest for meeting meeting of best knowledge and again moving moving towards................

A brilliant poem. Very perceptive. Yes, our motion is restricted when we are on a train but it enhances in one way or another our movement. We can go to places we like to see faster by the aid of a train. Wonderfully and cleverly written.10++

Of course life is a train moving along the rails of time... and we the passengers...'It moves on its tracks I move on my tracks'....very true.... I get out of this moving train My motion culminates This train is moving I am waiting for the next train'…...a lovely metaphorical poem 10+++

An endless circle of movemen where man and train are caught. Extraordinary!

Ah! On the nonstop train of life, always moving with or without us, with different stations to explore and experience. A very well written and meaningful poem!

They used to be called in the old days TGV in French train et grand vitesse, it had angel wings n lightning speed.

A meaningful poetic expression. Beautifully crafted...10++++