My mother,
I have not seen her in years;
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i loved this! ...its as if i wrote it myself.....she has decended up to heaven pain and insanity free barefoot as she tiptoes thru the tulips happy as can be her pain and insanity was traded for my grief I prayed to God to do this for her he answered swiftly, much to my relief no more pain or insanity
You use metaphors highly charged with thought and emotion.