Sunday, December 6, 2009

My Mother's Tears Comments

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My mother cried again last night.
I looked down trying to avoid her eyes,
Knowing that I was the cause of the pain.
She wrestled with my stare
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Hal Caufield
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Rania Hammoud 29 December 2009

.A nice anad expressive poem, v gd choice of words and, clear sentencs, but i guess if u had included it some music it would have been much more likeable.

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Danny H 06 December 2009

The beginning was absolutly beautiful, this poem is very moving.

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Rani Turton 06 December 2009

Moving, but hopefully there will be better days ahead?

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