Friday, May 21, 2010

My Mother's Lesson In Empathy Comments

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At the time, I was a five-year old boy
A visit to my aunty, always a joy
My cousin was playing with cars at the back
He just had a new one, the body in black
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Aufie Zophy
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2019

But, oh, what happened to my peers! Just yesterday, it moved me to tears While the children of John were playing their game My peers were trampled to death, what a shame......outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem is so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Jada Giddings 07 December 2018

I like the music, And this is a good poem i could not do that good. How do you do it?

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Jack Lamb 18 February 2017

This poem reminds me of my mother, a wise woman too! Thanks.

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Jaya Das 06 February 2017

So sweet poem, these lessons even my mom also used to teach me....great rhyme n a wonderful write Thank you

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 September 2016

The soul of man seeks love and appreciation and this aspect have been brought out so beautifully in this poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 May 2016

This beautifully conceived poem reasserts the universally accepted truth that mother is indeed the best and the greatest teacher for her child. Congrats for composing such a beautiful poem as also on it's being the Poem of the Day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 May 2016

Glad to have your work today as, poem of the day! Mine was read on the 8th of February this year. Nice dedication for your mother. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lyn Paul 07 May 2016

Lovely to read again. I believe we can still learn even more when we reflect on our mother's life. Thank You

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Unwritten Soul 07 May 2016

I still remember when i was reading this heartfelt tribute to your loving mother few years ago. It was beautiful and again it telling me now how beautiful this lesson and memory is...i just loved it again and again..God bless your mother and you are such a living life for her now...i am sure if she ever knw who you are now she must be proud... and Hans, congrats for this big day celebration, they chose your poem as a highlight and you deserved it. Mother no matter what race nationality religion and custom, mother unites world love.

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Bharati Nayak 07 May 2016

Congratulations for your poem getting selected Poem of the Day.Mother is the first teacher of a child.Mother's love, care, teachings and morality shape a child's character.Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem.

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Rajnish Manga 07 May 2016

More than the beauty of the narrative, it is the profound lesson taught by a mother to her son without inflicting any blow to this young man's dignity. The poet has done a great job. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 07 May 2016

Your mother taught you a good lesson, Aufie. Congratulations on having this poem selected as poem of the day!

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Bharati Nayak 17 January 2016

Your poem shows honesty of your mother as well as yours.The values we learn from our parents go with us through out our life.Nicely written.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 January 2016

That's what mothers are and should be, irrespective of any difference. Mother is the best as well as first teacher to any being. I salute our mother for being just that. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Sebastian 29 November 2015

Mother's love filled with wisdom teach her loved ones the joy of living happily. Of who I am, I owe it to my mother!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2015

My mother, incredibly sweet, incredibly bright Swallowed her anger but asked in a voice, slightly tight Please consider for a minute or two How you would feel if someone did this to you. Deep in my mind, I considered this plig these are the most beautiful lines in this poem. and your reacton Mother Mother................ soooooooo lovely

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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2015

Great poem, well written. Many of us have had a similar experience. Herein lies a moral lesson for all.

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Kelly Kurt 23 April 2015

Mothers are often very wise, and yours taught you well. Great poem, Aufie. Thanks for sharing

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Drashi Shah 30 October 2014

Wow.... it is reallly a great poem i must say hats off excellent....

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Sharilynn Reaser 24 May 2014

Oh the wonderful lessons of our dear mothers! My mother too taught me many great lessons!

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