My Mother Raised Me Better Than That... [an Echo To Kim Barney's Poem 'shall I Compare Thee To A Bale Of Hay? '; Humor? ; Aging Not-Gracefully; Kinda Short] Comments

Thanks for sharing, enjoyed this lovely poem.

Shakespeare burlesque....Yes, Shakespeare had been one of the longest running sources of the art form. You may just be on the cusp of forging the revival! Awesome work The Bard would approve! (?)

Poor old soul whose figure is similar to a hay stack(?) or bale of hay! She no more has an hour glass figure..... all such changes happen with aging! What to do..... can't help! Any way enjoyed this poem of not aging gracefully!

Overall young Bri... we must take thinks with a grain of salt and we all have to age somehow. Life goes so quick that we should not focus on appearance. Cheers again

Do you know why those round hay bales are outlawed in Pennsatucky? Its because... (see below) the cows can't get a square meal,

I am more of a haystack myself. Just don't go searchin for lost needles tho.: -) A fun poem, Bri. (as long as it wasn't directed at any females in your life.)