Sunday, October 15, 2017

My Mother, Motherland Comments

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Whose laps gave me

My mother's love and care
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Paresh Chakra
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Chinedu Dike 21 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart with conviction. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Paresh.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2018

Whose greenery in the fields Brought me up with care- She is my mother, my land, My Motherland, so rare.... very nice poem. try hard to become a great person.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Bisy Untan 25 November 2018

Beautiful thoughts! The nature always protects all with at most care. It appears as mother, mother earth and mother land. Congratulations for revealing the strength in us through your poetic flair.

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Bharati Nayak 24 November 2018

Whose rivers through the year Helped me ferry roads long. Whose greenery in the fields Brought me up with care- She is my mother, my land, My Motherland, so rare. - - - - - It is a wonderful poem giving tribute to your Mother and Motherland.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 28 October 2018

THIS IS A BEST POEM.I LIKE THIS. I LOVE MY MOTHERLAND.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 February 2018

A beautiful poem describing the love you have for your mother and the mother land.

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Rajendra Rout 03 May 2018

Yes sir it was a beautiful poem I agree with you.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 20 January 2018

I learnt to run and to stand. Whose fruits and leaves Fed me to give a body so strong. Whose rivers through the year Helped me ferry roads long. thanks poet great thought your poem10++++++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 December 2017

Helped me ferry roads long.so nice poem paresh10++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 13 November 2017

wow¡¡¡ what a beautiful poem.thanku paresh for your lovely poem..10+++++

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Rajendra Rout 31 October 2017

Whose greenery in the fields Brought me up with care- She is my mother, my land, My Motherland, so rare. A lovely poem on the Motherland.i enjoy your poem.th

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Prativa Rani 30 October 2017

Whose greenery in the fields Brought me up with care- She is my mother, my land, My Motherland, so rare. A lovely poem on the Motherland. Loved your emotions so much. 10++ for it.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 October 2017

Great start dear paresh.with greenery in thefields Brought me up wih care. Nice lines.keep it up.Thanks for sharing

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Rajendra Rout 01 November 2018

I agree with you Binaya sir.It is a very beautiful poem

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Paresh. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2017

She is my mother, my land, / My Motherland, so rare, , a lovely poem describing the true essence of mother and mother land..fabulous narration..I loved reading it..Thanks for sharing 10

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Rini Shibu 15 October 2017

A wonderful tribute to motherland

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Rajendra Rout 03 May 2018

Yes madam it was a wonderful tribute to motherland I agree with you

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 October 2017

She is my mother, my land, My Motherland, so rare. Beautiful effort Paresh, keep up this writing habit. Thanks for sharing,10 for the poem.

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Paresh Chakra 15 October 2017

Whose greenery in the fields Brought me up with care- She is my mother, my land, My Motherland, so rare. I love India, my motherland. It's a tribute to India. And It is dedicated to my Country.

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