Watching a glorious sunset,
playful are the waves on my feet.
Gold, red, yellow rays
sucked me in delicate passion.
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Heartfelt poem, no words can describe the beauty of this poem. Mother is one and only in this world nothing can replace her. Loved this poem. Thanks for inviting me to read this wonderful poem. Beyond ratings.....
In joy immeasurable the idea of things not being measured simply because it is to great, is hard to capture. This love is so great and It hurts to know you were deprived of it in many ways. I am thankful you know where the source of that love comes from. Thank you very beautiful poem 10+
Like Geeta I do believe that Ma is reading your poems, from the second you start writing them; she is connected; you can say: she is always reading your soul. I appraise life for giving us nature to communicate the essential things of our existence. I can agree with the vision, that this what sunsets are about.
A very beautiful poem on your loving mother. The very thought of her fills in you immeasurable joy. Beautiful sunsets leave you to view the stars. Let one of hem be your mother pouring blooms of blessings on you. Dreams of mother arouse in us a novel energy. Thank you Tony for sharing such a marvelous piece....10
Tony it is such a beautiful poem. Even though your mother is physically absent a vision of her is so comforting. Specially thinking of her while looking at the beautiful sunset. She sitting in the chariot is watching over you day and night. Thank you so much for sharing.
Tony, this is such an adorable poem that i can read it again and again. I have already commented on this poem earlier and am happy to be back again, to read it. Thank you Tony, for such a wonderful poem on your Mum. You are blessed by her always
So distant, but also personal.Sad and hopeful. Life poured into verses. Gotta love your work, genuine emotion!
Beautiful poem makes me think of my mother in heaven.May she Rest In Peace.
This poem touched my heart, having recently lost my wonderful Dad. Thank you for sharing.
what an interesting vision, tony. or did this come in a dream? and what a blessing for you to have gotten it. this may seem an odd connection, but this makes me think of a dream my wife had when she was mourning the death of our former pastor who, after struggling a long time with depression, took his own life. in her dream she saw him in a boat passing by. he was smiling and communicated that he was at peace and alright. -glen
The love of mother to her children is immense. It can't be valued easily, In this poem the depth of love of a mother has been astutely delineated. A beautiful poem and valuable one for which I made my second visit to this poem.
can feel every word...my dad also had cancer...Dr. Tony, only God can fill her absence wuth His presence! May you be healed completely of all the wounds and pains...God be with you...and you deserve 10++++
This is so beautiful. Very emotional piece of creation. It shows how much you love your mother. Mothers are angels on earth. I am all teary-eyed now and I feel like hugging my mother right away. You are a great poet Sir. Thank You for sharing this amazing piece of work with us.
This piece touched my heart, since I lost my mother at the end of July. I'm sorry your mother passed at such a young age and you lost her so soon.
Very heart touching. The lines show how much you miss your mother and waiting to be with her someday when she will come to meet you on a chariot. Great imagination. Wish the poem should not end.10+++
- - -Singing a glorious hymn pouring on me, her sweetest perfume, she touched my life from the chariot- - - This is a Wonderful tribute to your dear mom. May you always find peace and comfort in your heart. The beautiful memories you have of her will help you always to move forward. Take care and thanks for sharing.
Dear Dr. Tony, you have touchingly and stunningly inscribed the love among you and your lost mother. Though she is no more her love to her children is eternal. I know you have lost your mother at early age which pinched you a great shock. I too lost my mother when I was sixteen. I know the depth of yearn towards mother. Your strong emotion for missing her has been painted here immensely.... In hugs and kisses she murmured in my little ears. ‘You are my treasure, You are the apple of my eye’. She adorned me with the stars, blessed me with tenderness, filled me with treasures divine. It is indeed a gorgeous poem and a great tribute to a mother. Fine penmanship. Thanks for sharing...10
A heartfelt poem of longing for someone precious who has departed..... may you find comfort and solace in all the glorious sunsets yet to come even if they will never replace your lost Mom. Thanks for sharing a piece of yourself.