Sunday, July 13, 2008

My Mother In All Her Gloom Comments

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I was asleep when I heard the strange noise
Getting up I went to look
I felt like I didn’t have much choice
But in my boots I shook
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Matthew Harrison 18 August 2009

Hmm.....I'm sorry to say this is not one of my favorites. It seems to drag, then rush but I wanted to comment because I love the subject, stolen love from a fresh perspective. You're brilliant.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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