Friday, March 27, 2009

My Mother Divine Comments

Rating: 0.0

I opened my eyes in her godly arms
to see the world so fine.
Who gave her all to see me smile,
that's my mother divine.
...
Read full text

Vaibhav Pandey
COMMENTS
JAMES WASKLEWICZ 11 September 2018

AWESOME FOR SURE! ! !

0 0 Reply
fleur de lys 31 October 2009

A mother is a young child's universe and the adoration and the depth of devotion expressed in this lyric is palpable.

0 0 Reply
Prashant Shaurya 08 August 2009

beautiful poem.. we all love our mothers... bye ...

0 0 Reply

She took my hand to touch the stars, and placed them to my feet. The sky grudged for all this while and longed for them in desolate. great poem and i always rememebr mother divine all the times and it brings tears when i rememebr her....10 read mine...o.mother..mom i miss u...mother and i wept....along with papa do u know and papa u too..complet parent series

0 0 Reply
dr veenaa rai 20 July 2009

well written poem! ! ! god cdn't be everywhere so he made mothers...

0 0 Reply
Nooruddeen Mm 25 June 2009

Mr Pandy Mother is my weakness too as most our fellow society. When you fly thru the clouds, close by the moon and sun thoughts of your mother will diminish all your monotonous. Re. the poem; it is amazingly fine. Thnak you for sharing. Noruddeen

0 0 Reply
Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

nice one indeed...you ve expressed your emotions very well...think that your mom would'v felt ecstatic after reading this one..thanks 10++

0 0 Reply
Vidi Writes 25 April 2009

I used to be enthralled, as a mother - To hear the same emotions above From my kid who is a teen. The same feelings here, from same clan Makes me hop with thrill. Thanks for all the love from you children. Its a dream come true to have kids like you.

0 0 Reply
Michael Gale 10 April 2009

I wished I could'a rated it a ten plus. Great write. God bless us all-MJG.

0 0 Reply
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 April 2009

a true poem coming from a pure heart. you ma is privilaged. shan

0 0 Reply
Raj Nandy 09 April 2009

A lovely tribute to Mother Divine! Keep writing! -Raj Nandy

0 0 Reply
premji premji 08 April 2009

being a fighter, it is the perfect tribute to BHARATMAA.........

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 07 April 2009

A beautiful tribute to your Mother coming straight from the heart...great poem Vaibhav

0 0 Reply
Moushumi moushumi 04 April 2009

she's genuinely Mother-earth for me..well penned with lot of greatness...

0 0 Reply
Chitra - 04 April 2009

a gracious and befitting tribute to the source of our foundation. our archangel...wonderful

0 0 Reply
Ratnakar Rout 03 April 2009

Dear Vaibhav, I really appreciate your lucid expression about the role of mother in the life of a child.One can not pay back during his life time the secrifice a mother makes for rearing a child but it is desireable that he should express his gratitude candidly with out any hesitation.All the best wishes for such a nice poem. You may try my stuf if time permits.

0 0 Reply
rago rago 02 April 2009

A true picture of mother`s love. None in the world equals and above the mother`s love. Full nice presentation.

0 0 Reply
Susan Bagley 01 April 2009

What mother would not love these words. Very nicely done. My compliments. Susan

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 01 April 2009

good write...nothing compared for the mothers love...

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 31 March 2009

noble theme...good composition...good rhythm and rhyme...10

0 0 Reply
Vaibhav Pandey

Vaibhav Pandey

new delhi
Close
Error Success