Friday, August 18, 2006

My Mother And I Comments

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You dropped me off for the first day of school,
You cried a little and I looked like a fool,
You watched me play, play all day,
As you sat there, you would say,
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Alexis R.
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Kee Thampi 23 August 2006

You're gone now, and yes I’m sad, But it was for the better and for that I’m glad, It hurts to never see you, but are you gone? I’m sitting here smiling, thinking of times past, I wish we had longer to talk and sit around, But I feel you're still here and I hear you shout, Don't go too far, stay where I can see you I finally listen, and will never stray away this mother really dear to us, we love her Godly, the words of verse really fit and a gift , all poems are really flowing from our heart

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David Gerardino 18 August 2006

It hurts to never see you, i can see every word, great poem, my mom way back when, died of breast cancer, at the time i was about 14, this lesson in my life, left me cold and really lost, i mean lost, then after a few years i grow up a little and decided to move on, but never to forget, how love, my moms love, will stand strong, , any way great poem...

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