My mother - a fantastic blossom,
like on a flowerbed - lies on the couch.
She has the sound of girlish voices
of twenty years when she talks.
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absolutely stunning..! This poem, regardless of it’s powerful content.. :)
Good use of imagery. Lovely and very passionate tribute to a loving mum, nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Liza and do remain blessed.
Overt love of every child about mom, our mother is the best, nice poem perfect 10
Lovely poem a bout your mother. Brings back memories of my own mother, who passed away many years ago. You might enjoy reading my poem about her called MEMORIES OF MOTHER. Thanks.
This touching poem reminds me of my faraway mum. Thanks for sharing.
Sweetened with a child's love of the marvelous person that gifted you with life and with her charm and boundless love exudes radiantly her beams of care and optimism. Very lovely, Paul
Beautiful.. Thank you Liza. I have also written on the wonders of the mother. Please do read when you get a chance. I think you might also enjoy it. It is called Mother Dearest
Excellent Poem. I read your poem & I feel my mother who had died in a long time ago. Lovely narrated poem.Thank you so much dearest poet Liza Sud.
A nice warm poetic celebration of one's mother. What a wonderful gift to feel such pride relative to her mother! Many people are not so lucky to think that highly of their moms. This poem catches the spirit of a woman who has retained the characteristics of a youthful, unspoiled time in her life. Good for her! and Hurrahs for a poet!
A great tribute to a loving mother! Who else can command more love and admiration than a mother! She is the symbol of unconditional love! Loved reading the poem!
when she laughs in conservation the world smiles at me with more gleam I like yesyesyes -
What a great poem about your mom. I can imagine her there smiling! I love that you compared her to a flower.I intend to write a poem about my mother but haven't yet. Thanks for sharing this gem!
I can see and hear your mother talking.. Exquisite! Thanks Liza!
I think i have quite a few intonations too so i smiled at this lovely fab tribute to your mom. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'A recount.. of pandemic lockdowns worldwide s