Sunday, September 13, 2015

My Mother - A Fantastic Blossom, Comments

Rating: 4.7

My mother - a fantastic blossom,
like on a flowerbed - lies on the couch.
She has the sound of girlish voices
of twenty years when she talks.
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Liza Sud
COMMENTS
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2021

I think i have quite a few intonations too so i smiled at this lovely fab tribute to your mom. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'A recount.. of pandemic lockdowns worldwide s

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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

absolutely stunning..! This poem, regardless of it’s powerful content.. :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 July 2019

wow fantastic poem a tribute poem on mother; like this style

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2017

Good use of imagery. Lovely and very passionate tribute to a loving mum, nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Liza and do remain blessed.

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Johnmark O Okechukwu 05 November 2016

Good piece! Mother; our first love

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 02 April 2016

Overt love of every child about mom, our mother is the best, nice poem perfect 10

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Such a thoughtful tribute to mother!

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Kim Barney 16 December 2015

Lovely poem a bout your mother. Brings back memories of my own mother, who passed away many years ago. You might enjoy reading my poem about her called MEMORIES OF MOTHER. Thanks.

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Wang Qian 28 October 2015

This touching poem reminds me of my faraway mum. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Amrod 27 October 2015

Sweetened with a child's love of the marvelous person that gifted you with life and with her charm and boundless love exudes radiantly her beams of care and optimism. Very lovely, Paul

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Maria Gonzalez 26 October 2015

Beautiful.. Thank you Liza. I have also written on the wonders of the mother. Please do read when you get a chance. I think you might also enjoy it. It is called Mother Dearest

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Titto Mutunguti 25 October 2015

we all love our mothers..lovely piece

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Shahin Latif 22 October 2015

Excellent Poem. I read your poem & I feel my mother who had died in a long time ago. Lovely narrated poem.Thank you so much dearest poet Liza Sud.

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Seema Chowdhury 20 October 2015

Lovely expression, nice and inspiring

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Sara Militello 20 October 2015

A nice warm poetic celebration of one's mother. What a wonderful gift to feel such pride relative to her mother! Many people are not so lucky to think that highly of their moms. This poem catches the spirit of a woman who has retained the characteristics of a youthful, unspoiled time in her life. Good for her! and Hurrahs for a poet!

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Valsa George 19 October 2015

A great tribute to a loving mother! Who else can command more love and admiration than a mother! She is the symbol of unconditional love! Loved reading the poem!

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Wes Mbanje 17 October 2015

: -) I like very gentle

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Wes Mbanje 17 October 2015

when she laughs in conservation the world smiles at me with more gleam I like yesyesyes -

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Pamela Sinicrope 14 October 2015

What a great poem about your mom. I can imagine her there smiling! I love that you compared her to a flower.I intend to write a poem about my mother but haven't yet. Thanks for sharing this gem!

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Neran Sati 13 October 2015

I can see and hear your mother talking.. Exquisite! Thanks Liza!

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