Wednesday, November 4, 2009

My Mother Comments

Rating: 2.8

In the physical form
My mother is great
From the day I was born
She kept me straight
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Steven Aragon
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Mona Martinez 10 November 2009

so powerful and full of raw emotion. so sad in many ways but everything you said was true, there can't be a relationship until both of you are on the same page. i love this poem it not what i mostly see from a poem because to me most people only show the loving part. you were able to show the whole story through a wonderfull poem.

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Dev Poet 05 November 2009

This is so true/ the same pain I once felt towards my mother... as you get older things will fall in to place. Great Poem

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Steven Aragon 04 November 2009

Thank you very much. =)

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Steven Aragon 04 November 2009

Thank you very much. =)

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Simply Crazy 04 November 2009

i really like this. i can feel a little bit of what the narrarator is feeling. fantastic job.

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