Do you know
what thou art to me?
Do u?
Not only the one
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A remarkable reflection of a remarkable relationship! ! !
Mom..Sweet Mom. Given a chance we can keep on describing our Moms till all the space is taken up and surprisingly we'll still have things left out to mention. good job Anjali. A sweet 10. Ranjit.
very cute. very sweet poem. what a lovely art of making the word dance in meaningful strings of poem! ! . voted 10+++
...God cannot be everywhere so he made mothers.... Great tribute towards mothers.. Thank you for your pious art
Anjali, I read it earlier also, even before our 'message' acquaintance, but today I read it with rapt attention. The word ' mother' means a lot to me (perhaps to anybody) and I am just mesmerized.It is beautifully composed coupled with nice metaphors. You have brought out the inner words of any child of any age towards his/her mother. Much above 10.
Wonderful tribute to all mothers on Mothers day..A nice poem to feel the human touch..Some few old english words could be avoided to step with the running time. Thanks to dear Anjali. You have touched the hearts of all mothers.
hey anjali.. honestly any tribute to mothers is not enough. i dont think you and me or other can find enough words to potray their love and scarifice they had for us.. no matter how many yrs passed. awesome... writing.. lovely
Anju, You become universal through this poem. Yuo remember me J.M. Synge's Maurya in Riders to the Sea. you really prove that your mother is the best in this world, so also mine.
a very fine poem, centered on discipline. i like the daughter made.
What an exceptional poem gift for your mother. Words are imperishable and so are the memories of those great human beings to whom we owe our very existence. Beautiful. Love, SandraX
this is indeed a beautiful poem anjali ji.........I loved it...10
In this beautiful poem, your reverence for your mother might almost be likened to a hymn of praise to the almighty. Indeed, you have used many biblical turns of phrase in this effusive tribute to a woman who means so much to you. I like the way you acknowledge her firm hand as well as her loving heart. It takes real love to say No and children need mothers who are able to say no. 'Sunaina' is a very beautiful word. It adds lustre to this beautiful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
a very lovely tribute...beautiful thoughts unique style... decorated with all your love sequenced with humility and pride proud to have a mother like her... a wonderful daughter of a very wonderful mom.. as usual, Anju...your piece strikes us... 10+++++++ _maia_
Maa bachchon ki jaan hoti hai, woh hotey hain qismat waale jinke maa hoti hai...u narrated the emotion for moms in ur own very style for which i have so much reverence and awe... loving it is anju...10+++++
Sparkling with splendor and bursting with beauty. Wonderful words Anjali! My only regret that I did not read it to my mother before she died.100/10