When you leave me, I feel that I am lost,
because you are the angel who fire every ghost.
Oh mother, you are like the magnificent flower in my life,
I can't explain the care and warmth that you always give! !
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nice surrealistic metaphor because you are the angel who fire every ghost well written poem dedicated to a mother 10
no comment..........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! IT'S UNBELIEVABLE UR WAY IN WRITING POEM IS UNBELIEVABLE REALLY MERNA UR POEMS CAN'T BE EXPRESSED IN JUST ORDINARY WORDS U SHOULD BE CROWNED AS THE QUEEN OF POEMS....! ! !
Sad poem. So emotional too. A nice tribute to your mother. Well penned. 10+
I always love to read any writes about a mother..Maybe because I love my mother very much, and I am also a mother. This is a nice tribute fitted to your mother.
i read it many times it's magnificent.........it's from he best poem you have written........
Oh mother, you are like the magnificent flower in my life, I can't explain the care and warmth that you always give! ! Oh mother, you are a great gift, .every mother is so important in the life of kid and preserved good or badmemeory till death..it is lovley poemand i hve read it withdeep respect and feeling......10 readmine o, mother, , , , mom i miss you...momi cry eventoday...mother and i wept...mom, where are u? ? ?
A well penned write, and lovely affection towards your mother. purely deep indeed, great write.
lovely piece Merna...the love affection and respect for your mother you beautifully bring in this write...thanks...10
so true so deep so pure so emotional and so sweet....Great work keep it up.
Yes that is the true love...even the mother's to her mother...nice write
10/10. i cant give more, there is no such option. no words i find that i can comments
A mother's love is constant and unconditional.Your appreciation for your mother is very evident in your writing. A most wonderful write, young lady. Thank you Richard
perfect.....it looks like a song! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! the rhyme sounds great
hey this is a really stunning poem and i cant comment on this poem as it belongs to mother.....whatever you wrote is too short for describe abt mother...so really you are great to describe all these..... its a marbolous poem really touching one
Mothers, REASON of Life... they love us, they care about us, they worry about us............ Words can't explain their favor/ 10 for your Wise&Emotional Lines