Sunday, February 8, 2009

My Mother Comments

Rating: 4.9

When you leave me, I feel that I am lost,
because you are the angel who fire every ghost.
Oh mother, you are like the magnificent flower in my life,
I can't explain the care and warmth that you always give! !
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merna ibrahim
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 30 January 2010

Mothers, REASON of Life... they love us, they care about us, they worry about us............ Words can't explain their favor/ 10 for your Wise&Emotional Lines

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Tanvi Damle 20 January 2010

wow..i so luvd dis...itz realli beautiful

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Marieta Maglas 10 January 2010

nice surrealistic metaphor because you are the angel who fire every ghost well written poem dedicated to a mother 10

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Lina Ehab 27 November 2009

no comment..........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! IT'S UNBELIEVABLE UR WAY IN WRITING POEM IS UNBELIEVABLE REALLY MERNA UR POEMS CAN'T BE EXPRESSED IN JUST ORDINARY WORDS U SHOULD BE CROWNED AS THE QUEEN OF POEMS....! ! !

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2009

Sad poem. So emotional too. A nice tribute to your mother. Well penned. 10+

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Meggie Gultiano 12 November 2009

I always love to read any writes about a mother..Maybe because I love my mother very much, and I am also a mother. This is a nice tribute fitted to your mother.

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Omar Ibrahim 30 October 2009

i read it many times it's magnificent.........it's from he best poem you have written........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 October 2009

Oh mother, you are like the magnificent flower in my life, I can't explain the care and warmth that you always give! ! Oh mother, you are a great gift, .every mother is so important in the life of kid and preserved good or badmemeory till death..it is lovley poemand i hve read it withdeep respect and feeling......10 readmine o, mother, , , , mom i miss you...momi cry eventoday...mother and i wept...mom, where are u? ? ?

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Poetic Soul 26 September 2009

A well penned write, and lovely affection towards your mother. purely deep indeed, great write.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

lovely piece Merna...the love affection and respect for your mother you beautifully bring in this write...thanks...10

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Sara Here 10 March 2009

so true so deep so pure so emotional and so sweet....Great work keep it up.

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Wali Jamali 24 February 2009

Excellent Write-up. God bless you.

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Indira Renganathan 13 February 2009

Yes that is the true love...even the mother's to her mother...nice write

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Muhammad Ali 10 February 2009

10/10. i cant give more, there is no such option. no words i find that i can comments

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Liz Williams 09 February 2009

beautiful. I feel the love.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

May your mother never shift....! !

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Eddie Roa 08 February 2009

An anthem to maternal love. nice write

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C.R. Clark 08 February 2009

A mother's love is constant and unconditional.Your appreciation for your mother is very evident in your writing. A most wonderful write, young lady. Thank you Richard

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Omar Ibrahim 08 February 2009

perfect.....it looks like a song! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! the rhyme sounds great

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VEER the ultimate boy 08 February 2009

hey this is a really stunning poem and i cant comment on this poem as it belongs to mother.....whatever you wrote is too short for describe abt mother...so really you are great to describe all these..... its a marbolous poem really touching one

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