Friday, January 16, 2009

My Mother Comments

Rating: 4.4

I like to say ….. I like Complain
I like you to hug me my mother
I need your hands to wipe my tears
I like you to wipe on my head
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akram awadat
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loidz gums 03 November 2011

whew, beautiful poem...a message that reminds us how we love our mothers and their everlasting love for us....nice poem....

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Sandra Dodd 29 January 2010

Your hired! To sit down and teach my children how to love their mother! Well they do but this is fabulous. You honor her greatly here. Your words are wonderfully crafted.

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Marieta Maglas 09 January 2010

Your love in my blood my mother wonderful reflectiive poem, dedicated to a mother. 10/10

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 23 December 2009

Nice thoughts about Mother, the Ultimate truth on earth, the visible God.

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Merna Ibrahim 29 October 2009

A beautiful maternal poem! ! If you want, you could read mine 'My mother'.

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Siddartha Montik 28 October 2009

wonderful expression for a mother`s Love! ! for..mother is Mother that no one can replace her place! ! ! 10+++

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Mark Nwagwu 18 October 2009

the book you read, your mother therein, all the world understood, joy fills the heart. A great tribute to your mother, Akram - all the tears is went from your eyes, 'cause you've got this mother written all over your book

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Ency Bearis 07 September 2009

a wonderful tribute to a mother...lovely indeed.....10

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like you to hug me my mother I need your hands to wipe my tears I like you to wipe on my head... wordly praise may be less for mother. she is universal embodiment of love... i still cry for her.....10 read mine o, motehr, mom i miss you... Mom and i wept...child...read papa do u knwo and papa u too.. u will have complete feeling for family...comment

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a mother poem for every day when we are together..when we are away..10+++

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Fathmath Sana 03 June 2009

yuor poem made me smile!

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Smiley Hooker 29 May 2009

nice poem, my friend! a mother is the most valuable person in our life. we are nothing without a mother. we must love our mothers.: -)

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

Sentimental words...show the love and respect you have for your mother...good write, Akram...10

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Golda C Alexander 19 May 2009

I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece, Akram. Thanks for sharing and plssssssssss keep the poems coming because I look forward to reading more of your works. Cheers!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

'I need your hands to wipe my tears I like you to wipe on my head I am tired and the time is very hard' Very beautiful. As if all these are my lines, my desire... Akram my love with 10+++

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Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

nice clarify for each and every mother good job sir!

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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

its mother day and i was doing mother poems...an this avery nice piece but can we ever do justice to the phenomenon that is mother but great lines cheers

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Omar Ibrahim 20 April 2009

you are right!

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a touching poem for yourmother well done

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 April 2009

A sincere and heartfelt poem, coming right from the depths of the heart. You got compliments from great Greenwolfe. What else u want.

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