Saturday, May 7, 2016

My Mother-2 Comments

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For the shelter in your womb,
For the nectar in your milk,
For the laughter in your talk,
For the lustre in your look…
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 March 2017

Another beautiful poem dedicated to your beloved Mother! For the shelter in your womb, For the nectar in your milk, For the laughter in your talk, For the lustre in your look… Mother in the other world, I thank thee…! Thank you Subhas ji for sharing your wonderful thoughts.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 10 June 2016

For those staring, lovely eyes Restless, awaiting, returning guys, For those sleepless nights' care, Tireless efforts, pain you share, Never did you bother nor did flee.. Mother in the other world, I thank thee….. Thanks for this lovely poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 20 May 2016

For those staring, lovely eyes Restless, awaiting, returning guys, For those sleepless nights' care, Tireless efforts, pain you share, Never did you bother nor did flee.. Mother in the other world, I thank thee….. Beautiful regards in your poem for the mother. Thanks for the poem.

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Restless eyes, waiting for the beloved kids to reach safe, sleepless nights awesome, wish to be one such mom, thanks

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Chan Mongol 09 May 2016

The real feeling is focused in the poem. It says all. The inner expression is well constructed and charmed me a lot. For me such are master pieces. Beautifully decorated a mother. Thank you poet and a TEN for this brilliant work.

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Thank you Sir for the gracious visit and the invaluable remarks on my poem. I am grateful for this.

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Seema Chowdhury 08 May 2016

Beautiful and a nice tribute

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