My Mother Comments

Excellent poem, fantastically rendered, I can imagine the dying Mother, keep writing, your words are Gold, dear Poetess! TOP Marks (5 Stars in previous time it was 10 points) TFS

A fine narration of a typical moment on death-bed.

A shadow of my mother is always with me. I read your poem and I must say a good one. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.