My Mother - 1 Comments

What a beautiful tribute to your dear Mother! The metaphors utilised to describe your Mother are outstanding! God bless Subhas!

You are… Still in my heart As a forgiving being, Still in my brain As a voice of caring, Still within me As a loving divine stream, Still with me As a living human dream. I feel proud That I am on this Earth Just because you placed Me in your womb, Pray, ever I would Ever again henceforth To be born off you, After I enter the tomb. Wow it is a beautiful ode to all mothers. Thanks for sharing the poem.

You had been… A roof over my head, A plate under my bread, A sheet upon my bed, A patting hand for what I did. Beautiful poem on mother.loved each word, each stanza.

great tribute in a well written poem thanks-10

You are… Still in my heart As a forgiving being, Still in my brain As a voice of caring, ____________All children should think like this everyday. Every stanza is great in the poem. All poems of the poet are well constructed and academic toachieve number 10 from me. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely and very nicely expressed

I feel proud That I am on this Earth Just because you placed Me in your womb, Pray, ever I would Ever again henceforth To be born off you, After I enter the tomb. Lovely ode to such a holy and pious mother. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing the poem. Full marks. Seema

Mom sweet mom, our guardian angle living god, beautiful tribute to all mother as tomorrow is mother's day, thanks