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‘It's an evolution of her inspire…’ JUST LIKE MU MU MU* LINE. Excellent and intolerably passionate Sir. Ten ++ Ms. Nivedita UK * Love niv

A great poem with lunar images that impress the reader with vividness and originality, thanks for sharing very much, Sarwar. Y.M.

The great ambition of a women is to inspire love.. And the fate of a man is to fall for the trap. Lovely piece. Deserves a 10.

New. Fresh. lively. incredible. very sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.

really original! ! ! ! i love it.. i give you ten! ! ! 1

Very creative and entertaining write. well done! : -)

Light reflecting forms sparkiling ripples, moon lit river flows with love for all

Good poem Sarwar...imaginative piece, passonate...nice, seeing you coming back to PH...thanks...10

lovely imagination.. well scripted

very pretty and smooth. it has an interesting calming mood

great perception, of imagery......wonderful

highly imaginative poem. nicely expressed. voted10 surya

sweet beautiful love and music..loved it 'The great ambition of women is to inspire love' - Moliere .................................... Moon Moonlit And then moon-river in it Noon? No no Listen soon my love how meet'.

nicely penned..well expressed..grace

full of imagination... nice...

a dreamy kind of write..romantic and lovely, my dear

Lovely poem and unique diction. Well done Sarwar!

unique write, , .a nice presentation of the theme....interesting....10

Very nice poem and it's well written. I give it a 10

such a love such a poem i can feel your words