My Moon My Abuser Comments

Another beautiful poem sir! Many congratulations for the rank of popular member, mashaALLAH! You; ve motivated me :)

Moon with her varying shapes and moods has ever enticed poets and lovers equally.... How many verses have been so far written on moon and how many lovers have met under a moon lit sky! ! Your poem glows like a moon Akhtarji!

We rise like a crescent and die in dark, ......beautiful lines sir.....................

Cool write! Moon is my favorite theme of write. .A lot of thanks, being amused by you. I flown with you many colorful kites, I returned all that in my humble writes- - - - - - - lovely lines.

Wow. Beautiful words.... I flown with you many colorful kites, I returned all that in my humble writes.....Pleasant to read. Very true said even in palmistry and astrology moon is symbol of love. I agree with you. Loved the beautiful imagery you created with beautiful moon changing its beautiful phases each days....Loved reading it.

i lOve moon.... This poem is great and enough to describe the beauty of Moon [3 beautiful poem

I flown with you many colorful kites, I returned all that in my humble writes. You have so many beautiful lines besides this one. The whole poem is such a pleasant read. The rhythm and rhyme so smooth. Thanks for sharing.

a beautiful poem on moon.... i like the rhyming! ! :)