Baby, you make me happier than you will ever know,
It's as if Cupid has hit with his arrow and bow.
We met a few hours before the time it is now,
We're going to make this work, I'm not yet sure how.
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Tiffany! You have fallen hard for this guy. I hope he is half what you think he is. If not, I feel for you. Anyway, this is a good rhyming poem. Not great, just good. But it is worthy of your love expressions which are great. Good luck! GW62
Atta girl, Tiffany. Your mood swings are really dizzying. Glad to read happy poems from you.
hehehehe..lol tiffany darlin i knew who is this for..lol anywayz it's a gr8 love poem i luv it..
This is really beautiful and uplifting, I really do hope you find true happiness. The style of your writing and use of rhyme is great.