My Moon….! Comments

It took me a while, online, to find a definition of fearful which sounded right, assuming you meant people were sometimes afraid of the moon. causing or likely to cause people to be afraid; horrifying. ...Am i correct? :) i don't understand your use of spare. hmm? For 2 reasons i would drop the from the last line, ..but i understand. you obviously are 'in love with' the moon, or want us to think you are! Are you a werewolf? ? to MyPoemList bri (:

It is a beautiful poem on moon having haunting expression. I love the following lines very much. For him could I wish, to be happy and hale; No eclipse could engulf his face, Stay blessed forever and never be pale, And shower elixir from the space….! thanks for sharing.