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Moon moments, surely they must all be new and full of promise. Looking down he surveys us all but what can he really see? Excellent poem. Bob

Your thought provoking poem made me recall Bengal's revolutionary poet Sukanto Bhattacharjee, who died young due TB! He had written about the MOON, which appears to the starved & famished only as a half burnt bread & nothing else! ! Infact this had inspired me to write my poem, - 'MOON LIKE A ROLLED-OUT BREAD'! Would you find some time to read it please? Happy writing. - Raj Nandy

bhayya you are true it is similar theme but your poem is much better....thank you for sharing +++10

This is well, a interesting to put hunger and it's tragedy that way.I use more philosophy because it's the soul which bleeds more tragically.

you have a special gift to take the reader by surprise- sign of great poet. the imagery, allusion, one moment ecstasy next despair-well brought out.10+Sathya Mamta 03.09.08

A personal revelation that makes a man think about himself. A wothy subject for review. Always warrants a special 9 recommendation from me. GW62