Monday, March 15, 2010

My Moment Of Death Comments

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One day I died
And found true peace
Where all violence
Doth do cease
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The Devil From Hell
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Tht sounds a lot like the way i 1st saw it but it was my friend did he not realize thts were i wanted to b

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Raymond Rivera 15 March 2010

This is what I'm talking about. A very, very well written poem. I loved this one. Let's hope this paradise does exist. 9/10 You got the rhyming thing down.

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Johnny Khalil 15 March 2010

this poem is so fascinating and it is so true it is paradise

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