My Mistake Comments

Tears on my cheeks Path like path to paradise Tears landed on my lips Like rain landed on land.. very fine exoressions and imagination. tony

A sad introspective piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Alabi.

An interesting poem if one in a dilemma but you seem not to have faith in God to witness for you. Beautiful write up.