My Mistake Comments

Who had I become? Where had I gone? I was lost somehow. What had I done A very interesting poem. passionate description of experiences which every one of us go through in life. thank you. tony

A brilliant piece, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

A poem with a lovely flow and rhythm. Top marks. Best wishes, Andrew

You write passionately of a place we've all been! Excellent composition.

Very well-written and the self-questioning adds to the authentcity. Thanks and keep posting.

I agree with whoever gave this a nine. The writer here is good, but the construction and presentation of this poem was excellant. A real jewel. GW62

I like this one. Becuse I know how it feel to get that low in live

nicely written. keep them coming!