Wednesday, March 22, 2006

My Missing Half Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I wake up in the morning,
I want to hear your beautiful voice,
Only the radio alarm makes me realize,
that my other half is missing from my world.
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Jay P Narain
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Mandira Mitra 05 May 2006

surprised to see your poem on same topic. the language of yearning is universal, it seems! liked it.

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Elya Thorn 27 April 2006

Very very beautiful, although it is sad! A 10 from me, I think this was hard to write...or maybe it was a katharsis! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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