Thursday, September 15, 2016

My Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.3

Oh Dear Lord oh my God I've got back my glow,
Friends told me today it's the mirror you know!
T'was showing me a girth that I couldn't swallow,
The chin was all double with my eyes sunk in hollow,
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Dipy Hermonite
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Manohar Bhatia 15 September 2016

very well written poem Dipy. Manohar Bhatia

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2016

Wonderful reflection is shared with trust on God and mind is interesting mirror here. Friendship with God is eternal and this does not break at all. So pleasing line is, Dear Lord oh my God I've got back my glow, . EXCELLENT! ..10

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Gajanan Mishra 15 September 2016

happy friendship day, good write.

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