My Mind Speaks! Comments

I like this. I like this very much. It's like we're sitting at a coffee shop, chatting about this n that, sharing writer's blocks, waving at old buddies walking by. It's got a personal feel to it. Great write.

Mind flows spontaneously while thought comes automatically for writing. This is very interesting to know about speaking of mind and your imagination is full of skill and learning.10

Fantastic composition. Thanks for sharing.

favorite lines so far: The falling rain and the heavy whirling wind They flushed out the hiding words My brain then starting to recall I couldn't fight my mind, not at all...........................whirling wind is especially nice for me. and the rest of the poem is very nice as well. to MyPoemList it shall go, and to my/our AUGUST 2016 'a showcase for PH poets'. thanks for such a grand addition to the showcase. but i wonder: did things really happen as you say in the poem? either way, it is a fine write. i like all the rhymes near the end. bri :)