My Mind Screams Comments

Wowser! think George adds everything to this with his comments, this is so very deep and so very dark. Love it Alison, do hope you found the light. HG: -) xx

Grim, dark and SO VERY REAL. I know that place and your 'real' write lays it out for all to see. May this grimness pass quickly into the light Allie, my friend. George

i really liked this poem, i can relate to every word you wrote, nicely done.

Alsion, sometimes the walls we build up are invisible to others. We all build them from time to time to protect us from the realities we do not want to face. I've built a few walls like that myself. I liked this poem because I could relate to what you said. - David