Monday, July 10, 2006

My Mind's Leopard Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cannot chain you.
I shut my eyes, and there you dive
Against the backdropp of veined darkness,
Roaming in the jungle of my starry mind,
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Masiela Lusha
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Brian Jani 13 July 2014

wow this is attention gripping poetry, i was emersed in the read.keep it up hey.

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William Jackson 16 July 2006

Cool poem. Rich metaphor. Great ending.I find my mind races at night and will not shut down even when I try to sleep. Still, I would not tame it for anything. I like the description of your eyes darting open, and I like the question at the end of the poem. Excellent read!

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Masiela Lusha

Masiela Lusha

Tirana, Albania
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