My Mind's Dawn Poem by me poet yeps poet

My Mind's Dawn

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They came to say
what their experience

then dictated
they have gone

but not left unheard
hopefully

though human mind
has a limitation

it retains but little
for an indefinite
expanse of time

so even what I say
will not be ingrained

on the walls of Time
permanently

nor will I get fame
in my living
as I chime

but

I shall remain
for long

on the psyche of human mind
till ordains it
my TIME

Saturday, January 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fame,name,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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MY MINDS DAWN @ SEVENTH DECADE
We all live our own lives
fools try and live others kind
MY MINDS DAWN @ SEVENTH DECADE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2020

(- -) visualized there many things non-visualized things are mysteriously hidden in mind artist discover very a few on the canvas but the tape of mind a finest fiber of unknown zeal to know but all in cryptic riband subtle feelings come out as the needles but express as the axe mind is mind a game of fine art in circadian rhythm

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2020

everything everything is introvert discover itself where many thoughts play world a visionary stage mind an absolute traveler but lonely to the whole world (- - -)

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Kingsley Egbukole 19 January 2020

Interesting poem. Well crafted.

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Mj Lemon 18 January 2020

Magnificent...fame, and all things are fleeting. But can the same be said of time itself? One of your finest, Poet.

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