Wednesday, September 13, 2006

My Mind Game Comments

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My body remains lifeless,
Lethargic,
Longing
For the one,
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CHARMAINE SIMPSON
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Brian Dorn 13 September 2006

Gripping write, Charmaine, ... intensively written and vivid. Well done! Brian

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Steve Hagget 13 September 2006

This is a really good poem, Charmaine, beautifully crafted and with a great sense of depth, Steve

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CHARMAINE SIMPSON

CHARMAINE SIMPSON

Adelaide - Australia
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